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Got Beef - Talbot vs. Midori 2 by ~fcneko:iconfcneko:



“What… the… hell!?” I asked.  The slight girl with the glowing circuitry in her bodysuit went spinning through the air as I applied force enough to break her ankle and finish the fight.  Instead of the gut-wrenching crunch of broken and grinding bone, she flipped her leg around and spun through the air like a horizontal pirouette.  For a half-second, I was reminded of those bad vids where wires are used to suspend someone in the air, but then I realized, she was able to pull it off thanks to the highly-illegal cybersuit she was wearing.  Even so, she still lost her breath when she hit the ground and only just avoided the stomp I aimed at her leg by spinning up and around.

“What the hell ARE you?” I asked again, watching as she spun up to her feet and eyed me.  No smile.  No anger.  This was a professional, on some sort of professional hit.  “Did Samantha send you?  Tell her I’m sorry already…”

That worked.  The expression on her face changed to one of puzzlement.  Okay.  So not Sam.  Taking advantage of her momentary confusion, I lunged, planting a fist in the side of her head that sent her staggering.  Prepared for that, I reached out with my other hand, grabbed her by the arm and spun her back, capturing her arms.

“Was it the Zebra Lady?  I told her those were bad when I delivered them to her, but she just wouldn’t listen.”

In response, she cracked her head back against my jaw, which was already aching.  Gritting my teeth, I squeezed tight enough to get a gasp out of her.

“Right, then.  Can we at least talk about this?”

She didn’t answer.  Instead, she came back with a stomp to my booted foot which, while not seriously damaging, hurt like a bitch.  She followed it up with an elbow to my side, loosening my grip.  A moment later, she had slid out, spun about and planted her foot across my cheek again.  Thankfully, even in her suit, she wasn’t THAT strong, or she might have just dislocated my jaw.

“Right then,” I muttered, rubbing my face.  We exchanged a flurry of blows, her punches blocked by my forearms, my punches blocked by her retreating twists and the occasional redirect of an arm into an attempted pin.  Most of the time, however, she relied on her far more powerful kicks and I soon had a collection of bruises to remember her by.  After a few of these, she must have noticed that I was grinning because her expression changed.

“You’re enjoying this?” she asked, side stepping a punch and reversing into a spinning punch aimed at my jaw again.

“Actually, yes,” I said, catching her fist, twisting and spinning her up and over my shoulder.  She flew into a pile of metal crates that clanged about and echoed through the chamber.  When she stood up, she was shaking her head and massaging her back.  “Sorry ‘bout that,” I said, “I wouldn’t be doing this, but you started it…”

Before I could finish, she had launched herself into the air again, foot aimed at my face.

This was really starting to get old…
©2007-2009 ~fcneko
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The response to the Got Beef post :iconforsaken2544: placed!

In the great tradition of Neo vs. Morpheus, Talbot wipes his nose with his thumb and then gestures for more comers.

BRING IT!
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sweet read, and great Beef. welcome to the fray. hope to read some more Beef from you in the time to come.

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Oooh...this is fun! Perhaps there is a round 2 in the works?

Or perhaps someone on your end wants to challenge one of my other characters. ...

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"I reject your reality and substitute my own."
“How about you swallow some razor-wire, pull it out your ass, and FLOSS YOURSELF TO DEATH!”
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I didn't want to finish it since the pics don't show people winning/losing... A friend DID suggest that I end it with Talbot unplugging the Virtual Reality display he must be playing, since he's not USUALLY as big as Pitbull! ^_^

How would we continue it?
Well, I have some ideas. I just like the idea of continuing to pummel each other...since its obvious that neither seem to be getting the upper hand so far. (I'm already brainstorming round two)

Also...Team fights are authorized. Maybe Pitbull does show up...and Midori can soil her suit at his size. Although...I don't have any other characters (except Gene) and I'm not sure how valuable he would be in a fight.

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"I reject your reality and substitute my own."
“How about you swallow some razor-wire, pull it out your ass, and FLOSS YOURSELF TO DEATH!”
My writing: [link]
Great read. You and :iconforsaken2544: have kicked this thing into another level. Glad to have you two aboard and keep those writings coming!!!

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Thanks for the comment! Talbot kicks more tail in his own series of stories on my site. Take a look!
will do

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